Here is some of Lily's writing here it is
The Hungry giant lunch
One day dad was so hungry he said to me get me some food! So he ate 5 bags of salt and vinegar chips and 10 bottles of fizzy but he said I want more food but he felt sick but he still wanted to eat food and he had also had some crunchy weetbix. He also had a lot of orange juice WOW! Thats a lot of sweets said Lily and 100,000 cookies. I don't think dad will eat that much food again.
The Park
On Monday after school I went to the park but mum did not come but my dad did. I had a picnic and I played on the slide and after that I played on the spider web and then mum came to the park and me and mum played with me then we just left.
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